Just read this first chapter of your newest story and I'm enjoying it so far. I've only got two things that are bugging me. One, some of the characters attempts to be vague and discreet are confusing in their wording and as a result, annoying. And two, what season are you spinning SPN off from, late four/early five? Or season six? I ask because I originally thought it was the former from the bits of information you had dropped earlier in the chapter only to come up short when you mentioned Sam going to hell for his brother, which suggests the latter. Did you maybe retcon Winchester family history? I'm confused. I'm not going to let that get in the way of my reading though. I'm cautiously curious about where this story is going (cautious because that warning you gave about cars and sex makes me worry about my sanity) and fully intend to see to the end. That said, I'm off to read the next chapter. Thanks for the new story, Vo! Happy Writing!

Author's Response: technically i stopped watching in season 3, and saw bits and pieces of four/five/six so i've meshed them to make it flow better without all the hell in between. as for the vagueness, some of that is on purpose, sorry. some of those are probably background characters you'll never see again. but i'm glad you liked it enough to write and i hope you like the rest more. vo.

Nice of Tony to share the migraines and mental scarring. So, I very much enjoyed this chapter, particularly the part about trapping Willow in a bottle. An excellent way to ground an out of control witch. I look forward to your next update, whenever that turns out to be. BTW, is Old Ones a completed 'verse yet? I haven't gotten all the way through yet so I don't know about the last one you posted here. Anyway, thanks for the new story and Happy Writing!

Author's Response: Tony's very sharing at times. the next update will be when i finish proofreading and the story. old ones is finished on my system but you guys have not got the final parts yet. the last part is 63. vo

Thank you so much for giving us such a great story! Early even! Not to sound greedy or anything, but does this mean we get to see one of the other stories you were working on as an Independence Day treat?

Author's Response: no, you're getting a part of lineage and the rest of the old ones series. sorry, the others still need more proofreading. but i'm glad you liked this one so much. vo.

Cute story! And I agree, Fury needed both an ass-kicking and chewing out. I thought I should mention though that you again spelled 'wuss', 'woose'. It's spelled 'wuss' on Wikidictionary and in pretty much every book I've ever read. Unless you're spelling it with an accent, then I guess I would be wrong. Anyway, thanks for another great story! Happy Writing!

Author's Response: i've seen it spelled both ways. but i'm glad you liked it. vo

A good story. I like Lineage better though. In part because it just seems to have been written better. You can see the progression of time a it happens whereas here, if you're not paying close attention, out can miss the quick and vague mentions of time passing, making it seem as though the whole story aes place over a period of a few weeks or months rather than the couple of years it probably was. Also, the scenes shifted from centering on one person to another so abruptly, often onto s person that was never named, that it was really easy to become confused what was going on with who. That happened a few times with this story. The other reason I liked Lineage better was because I just like the plot more, and because of the inclusion of the Winchesters while minimizing Sam. Sam is just not my favorite character. Anyway, while a good story over all, I'll be far more excited when you post a new chapter for Lineage. Thanks for the read, Happy Writing!

Author's Response: at least you liked something. happy reading but it'll probably be a month for the next part of lineage. vo